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It was deep in the summer of 1990, in a corner of Louisiana where the air sticks to your skin and everything smells like wet wood and impending rain. That’s when my girlfriend and I broke up.
“I can’t keep pretending,” she’d said that last night, her voice barely above a whisper. We were sitting on her porch swing, the chains creaking with each small movement, cicadas drowning out the spaces between our words. “Can you?”
I wanted to say yes, wanted to reach for her hand the way I used to, but my fingers stayed curled around the warm beer bottle in my lap. We’d been dragging ourselves through the motions for months, too much silence, not enough softness. The easy laughter had dried up somewhere between spring and the suffocating heat of July. I didn’t know what I wanted back then. Freedom, maybe. Or just not to feel trapped by the weight of her expectations, the way she looked at me like I was supposed to have answers I’d never learned to give. She wanted something different too. Maturity, she called it. A man who knew where he was going.
“I’m sorry,” I said, because it was the only truth I had.
She nodded, tears catching the porch light. “Me too.”
Later, she’d become my wife. We’d build a life, raise children, pay the mortgage, sit side by side in the dim glow of late-night TV for almost two decades. But that summer, we were nothing. Two separate stories, drifting apart like smoke. And I slipped into another one.
Her name was Rachael, but her presence never left me. I met her outside a run-down gas station near Ponchatoula, where the light looked dusty and the bugs never stopped humming. She was barefoot, fresh from tubing down the Tangipahoa, her hair a mass of dark curls, swatting at the heat like she was mad at it.
“You look like you’re melting,” she said, glancing at me through the window of my truck as I pumped gas. Her laugh came easy, musical. Her eyes didn’t, they held something deeper, sadder, like she’d been carrying weight too.
“Feels like it,” I said, and she smiled.
“I know a place that’s cooler. If you’re not in a hurry.”
I wasn’t. I hadn’t been in a hurry for anything in months.
We only spent one night together. No fireworks. No big declarations. Just two people, hurting in the same direction, finding comfort in not having to explain themselves. The kind of night that’s made more of silence than conversation. A fan clattering in the window of her small apartment, sheets that smelled like sun-bleached detergent, soda bottles lined up like sentinels on the nightstand. Her body against mine felt like a question I didn’t know how to answer, gentle and desperate all at once.
“Don’t make this more than it is,” she whispered against my shoulder as dawn crept through the thin curtains. But even then, I knew it already was. I never saw her again. We didn’t say goodbye- I’d slipped out while she was still sleeping, her face peaceful in the early light, one hand tucked under her cheek like a child’s.
I went back to my girlfriend, like slipping into an old coat with frayed edges you pretend not to notice. We talked it through. Made promises. Set a date. The years folded into each other after that, babies, bills, funerals, the slow erosion of things we’d once thought were permanent. Life passed like it does in southern towns: slow, steady, then suddenly gone. My marriage ended quietly, not with shouting but with the gradual recognition that we’d grown into different people entirely. The kids took it hard, but they adjusted. Kids always do. It wasn’t until my fifties, alone again in a quiet house with a ceiling fan that hummed just a little too loud, that I found out what had happened to Rachael.
A mutual friend mentioned it casually at a barbecue, the way people do when they think enough time has passed to make old wounds safe to touch. She’d gotten pregnant. Hadn’t told a soul. She’d left the state, had the procedure in secret, and vanished for good.
“Happened right after that summer,” he said, not knowing. “Poor girl. She never was the same after.”
But I already knew, somewhere inside me, I had always known. Because for years now, I’ve felt something else living in this house. In the corners. In the walls. Not a haunting exactly, more like a presence, a warmth that settled in after my divorce, when the silence became too complete. A memory that kept breathing. A girl.
She never speaks, but she lingers. She moves things, plays with the air conditioning, makes the lights flicker just enough to notice. She laughs softly in the night, not cruel, not mournful, just… present. I’ve felt her tug the blanket off my feet just to make me stir, the way a child might. I’ve smelled gardenias when none are in bloom, caught glimpses of movement in my peripheral vision. I’ve heard footsteps when no one was home, light and quick across the hardwood. And sometimes, in dreams, I see her: blonde hair like hay in sunlight, always running through tall grass, always just out of reach. There’s longing in her, just like there is in me.
She should’ve been part of this family. My children don’t know her name, but she’s made herself known to them anyway during their visits. A misplaced toy found in an impossible place, a soft whisper when they’re falling asleep, a second shadow that follows them down the hallway. My daughter, now grown with children of her own, once asked during a Christmas visit, “Dad, who’s the other girl in the house? The one who plays with Emma’s blocks?”
I couldn’t answer. I just nodded, and she seemed to understand something I couldn’t explain, the way daughters sometimes do.
Sometimes I wonder what her laugh would’ve sounded like when she was eight. If she would’ve loved fireflies or hated the dark. If she would’ve drawn dogs on her homework, like her sister did, or been more serious, more careful with her pencils. I wonder if she would’ve inherited Rachael’s easy smile or my stubborn streak. I wonder who she might’ve become, had things gone differently. Had I known. Had I chosen differently that morning when I left without leaving my number.
But I didn’t. And she’s gone.
Or maybe not gone, just… between. Caught in the space where love and loss meet, where intentions and outcomes never quite align. She visits me in my dreams, stands at the end of the hallway like she’s waiting for me to say her name. I don’t know it, never will, but I say I’m sorry anyway. I say I love her anyway, this daughter who never drew breath but somehow still lives in the spaces between what was and what might have been. I tell her I see her. That she matters. That her existence was real to me. Is real still.
“I wish I’d known,” I whisper to the empty hallway, and sometimes I swear I feel a small hand squeeze mine before letting go. What more can I offer than that?
I live with her now, in this small house with the creaky floors and the cracked driveway, my granddaughter’s chalk drawings still fading on the pavement. Her spirit is woven into the everyday, the way the morning light falls across the kitchen table, the sudden stillness that settles over the room when I’m reading, the feeling of being watched with love rather than judgment. She is my unfinished sentence. My held breath. My quiet grief transformed into something gentler, something that feels almost like grace. And I will carry her, always, this child who taught me that some love doesn’t need flesh and bone to be real, that some connections transcend the boundaries of what we think we understand about beginnings and endings.
In the evenings, when the fan hums its familiar tune and the shadows grow long, I sometimes catch myself humming too, soft lullabies I never got to sing, bedtime stories that end with “I love you” whispered to the warm, listening air.
Anthony B Parr was born in Kentucky and bounced from California to Louisiana, Anthony is a writer and educator with degrees in history, special education, and psychology. He’s written novels, plays, and games, including “Lost Souls” and “The Turquoise Trail” children’s series. His work appears in national publications.
